Re: NastyGoon lifts a line

On Sat, 8 Feb 2025 21:35:32 +0000, HarryLime wrote:

On Sat, 8 Feb 2025 21:20:30 +0000, W.Dockery wrote:
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On Sat, 8 Feb 2025 20:44:41 +0000, HarryLime wrote:
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Will Dockery wrote:

On Fri, 7 Feb 2025 0:04:15 +0000, George J. Dance wrote:

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https://www.novabbs.com/arts/article.php?id=255731&group=alt.arts.poetry.comments
On Mon, 3 Feb 2025 16:15:27 +0000, Michael Monkey Peabrain (MPP) aka
"HarryLime" wrote:
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I realized from the content of NancyGene's posts that they were
intelligent, well-educated, and better written than anyone here.
Naturally, I asked them to start contributing to the "Sampler."  And I
was right in doing so.
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Here are the opening lines of NancyGene's latest poem:
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"Yesterdays stack up like piles of read newspapers,
Cluttering my mind and obstructing my day."
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That's poetry of the highest quality.

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The opening line is very good. It's almost as good as the opening line
of Robert Creeleys poem, "The Days Pile Up":
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"The days pile up like unread newspapers,"
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I do hope "Dr." NastyGoon credited Mr. Creeley; otherwise that would be
something they would call, you know -- "plagiarism".

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NG changed one word and suddenly she thinks that the line is "original"
now.

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1) She did not change *any* words, Donkey.  Since she had never read
Creeley's poem, she had nothing to change.
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2) There several differences between her opening line and Creeley's.  In
fact, only 3 words are the same: "up," "like," and "newspapers."
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More importantly, the things described by their words are totally
different.  NancyGene compares YESTERDAYS to READ newspapers; whereas
Creeley compares DAYS to UNREAD ones.
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IOW: NancyGene's poem is describing MEMORIES, whereas Creeley's is
describing TIME.
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And of course here comes her fellow thug troll Michael Pendragon to try
to explain it all away.
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Right.

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I'm just explaining

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You're just defending your fellow thug troll as usual and as expected,
Harry.
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And so it goes.

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Are you saying that stacks of read newspapers

I'm saying the thought wasn't really original for Nancy Gene.
HTH and HAND.