Re: Chorus 6 / Saint Augustine Blues

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Will Dockery wrote:

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"General Zod"  wrote in message

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 Will Dockery™ wrote:

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Chorus Six
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Dollars in the bucket
collect for the street singer.
Old man with beads paints a chinaberry
points out the parrots.
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Blonde after blonde after blonde
after the parade.
People start looking really strange again.
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I must seem likewise to them
as this dusty smell surrounds me.
I'd draw these people with words
but I'm not fast enough.
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They pass and fade
part of the parade.
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On this really old wall
good view from up here.
Forever is a long time
but not as long as yesterday.
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-Will Dockery

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Is this a re-write?

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Good morning, basically the same, minor changes, thanks again for
reading and commenting, my friend.

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Another of your greatest poems, Doc....

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As another day dawns, I tend to agree.

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Right on...