Re: "Blue Car" / Will Dockery

Will Dockery wrote:

General-Zod wrote:
>

Will Dockery wrote:

>
Blue Car

>

Blue car
fades into the foggy summer night.
Through the fog
there's a street light.
Another stranger passes into the night.

>

Down in the valley
at the bottom of the city,
below the radio waves,
the night moves
in silent sad swirls.

>

At the bottom of the city
it's silent and still,
almost dawn.
Light seeps from behind the trees
a pale sky, like your eyes.

>

White bird flying,
sundown's edging in.
Scarlet sun throbbing.
In another country
it might be different.

>

I hear the sounds
of birds in the trees
and you are so close
soft, like butter.

>

I look into your eyes
in the morning light.
Walking on dew-covered grass.
Above us, the clouds churn white
feels like we're in some other century.

>

Sitting on a red clay bank
in the shimmering, blazing sun.
You came from behind,
after watching me for a while,
then sat with me in the hot dry air.

>

The moon is covered
by grey swirls of clouds,
as I walk the street at midnight
I notice a storm is brewing.

>

-Will Dockery July 1977

>

----------------------------------
From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/03/blue-car.html

>

A slice of 1970s life.... quite good....

Thanks again for reading and commenting, Zod.

>
Once more, one of your greatest of poems....