Sujet : Re: Star Child Memory / Will Dockery
De : will.dockery (at) *nospam* gmail.com (W.Dockery)
Groupes : alt.arts.poetry.comments rec.arts.poemsDate : 01. Feb 2025, 21:28:25
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On Sat, 1 Feb 2025 1:35:39 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:
Will-Dockery wrote:
Hector Heathcliff wrote:
On Wednesday, January 29, 2025 at 5:43:25 PM UTC-5, Will Dockery wrote:
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Star Child Memory
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Snapshot of a moment
an outdoor poetry reading
in early Spring 1996.
Glimmering stars
and looming moon
through the gloom.
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Passing through
in that cavern
of concrete, glass and brick
off Broadway.
I join the poetry reading
already in progress.
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There's a hush in the air
as we approach.
Star Child and her friends
standing with me
on the sidewalk.
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Glimmering stars above us
Springtime
constellations.
Poets sit in a circle
in the alley
behind Bazaar Earth.
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In those early days
so late in the game.
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But I couldn't remain
back then
I had to keep on moving.
I told them they couldn't get
high enough
to float with me.
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Star Child twinkled and tweaked
skipping by me
in that spangled night.
Stopping at the parking meter
waving goodbye.
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-Will Dockery
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Draft post, comments and suggestions welcomed for the upcoming re-write.
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:)
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Outstanding addition to the Shadowville Mythos, Doc....
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Thanks again for reading and commenting, we're in the process of
adopting this
story to music, at the studio.
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We? And when will this happen, ? You're responding
to a post that is four years old now.
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In the year 2025, stay tuned.
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😏
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Waiting with anticipation!
I can post the instrumental guitar part to YouTube but the lyric
structure
is still being fine tuned:
https://youtube.com/shorts/LiMdyP7QniY?si=_NpsToLWTXP7WZ3pThis is a response to the post seen at:
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=659908913#659908913