Re: Coil / Will Dockery

On Mon, 17 Mar 2025 22:03:51 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:

MummyChunk wrote:

Will Dockery wrote:

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Coil
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This coil of pain
memory burns
with flashing image
and haunting misses.
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Distinct dream vision
mixed up with consciousness
train seems right on top of me
conductor has an agenda.
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Only the gods see beyond this veil
I've seen those eyes
red blazing and shaking.
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No time to think,
no desire to.
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There seems to be a wide awake
slow ride
consciousness carries
stretches through these years
these days... this minute.
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As if the night could purify
rather than corrupt
my reptilian hands
my repetition in signs.
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-Will Dockery  (2003)
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{Revised and updated 2025)

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Trying to understand your problem.  But if it is related to this - since
this was a post reply to
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?t=631491687 and you did not
quote, then the text of the very 1st post of that thread -
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=657979739#657979739 should have
been automatically quoted when it went out to usenet and the reference
message ID should have been the same (the very 1st post of that thread)

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Yes, that is exactly what happened.
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If you look at your message (message id: Message-ID:
<lYCdnceHaIGR7EX6nZ2dnZfqn_idnZ2d@giganews.com>) that you posted:
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=685772091#685772091
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it quoted the 1st post
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=657979739#657979739 of this
thread automatically http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?t=631491687
when it went to USENET since you did not quote and it referenced that
message as well: (References: <vr69n1776c4sf8@corp.supernews.com>)
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Seems as if it functioned just as the admin said it should.

I know.
I'd like to find a way to get around that, but I need more practice.
Since I've been posting on these Usenet newsgroups for over twenty
years, getting used to a completely new format will take some time.
Thanks for all your excellent feedback, though.
😏