Sujet : Re: The Man / A Poem by Rachel / cheesetray productions
De : will.dockery (at) *nospam* gmail.com (W.Dockery)
Groupes : alt.arts.poetry.comments rec.arts.poemsDate : 02. Nov 2024, 10:50:06
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On Wed, 30 Oct 2024 13:17:25 +0000, cheesetray wrote:
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> cheesetray wrote:
> The Man
> This publication dedicated to the people of Puerto Rico
>
>
> As I stood there, I remembered.
> Remembered the man who destroyed my family, my people.
> I never knew him. The only image
> that formed in my mind was the Devil himself.
> Then my head began to ache, and my mind began to burn.
> And as I stood there, I remembered.
> Remembered the Nazi pig who held Germany under his power.
> Who had people heil his name. The crazy mental who believed
> pure meant blonde hair and blue eyes.
> The man who threw up his hands and used the "Final
Solution."
> And as I stood there, I remembered.
> Remembered the man who killed my people for their beliefs.
> Who took them to camps and tortured them.
> The idiot who dropped bombs on their houses.
> The man who murdered six million.
> And as I stood there, I remembered.
> And as I stood there, I cursed his name.
>
>
> Rachel Ben-Levi
> March 13, 1982
> Princeton, NJ
> Age 11
> (I changed killed to murdered here. Both had a rhyme (the first,
internal, i and i and i, and ill, this present change, both internal,
i and i and i, and first letter consonantal rhyming, m and m)
>
>
> faithfully yours,
> -cheese
>
i just noticed. m AND m and m.
>
and i here is my infamous dangling parenthesis ---> )
>
>
This is a response to the post seen at:
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=677318876#677318876
Interesting read.