Re: 17 Poems / Will Dockery

Will Dockery wrote:
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"Akmar Raggyhead"  wrote in message

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"Will Dockery"

<will_dockery@outlook.com> wrote:

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Poem Twelve in the "17 Poems" series:
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Soft Shadows
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Soft shadows of two men
move and evolve.
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Commercialism is the word
a fact of life
sometimes very pleasant.
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I've been here before
I will be here again.
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Roger that.
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Soft sound from the piano below
shifts and flows
from this dizzy height.
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It's hard to see anything
in the effort to get everything.
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-Will Dockery
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As always, useful comments & constructive criticism welcomed, trolls

will

be
ignored.

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i dont like that one

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Oh well, maybe the next poem.

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Ha ha...!