Sujet : Re: "Carload of Poets" / Will Dockery
De : will.dockery (at) *nospam* gmail.com (W.Dockery)
Groupes : alt.arts.poetry.comments rec.arts.poemsDate : 22. Jan 2025, 10:00:33
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Thanks for reading and commenting, any corrections you have
to offer are appreciated.
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:I've made some corrections:
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https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/10/carload-of-poets.html
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Carload of Poets
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A carload of poets injured on the highway
in the late afternoon.
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The smell of the lumberyard pine on 280
aromatic breeze fills my car
as I observe this.
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Splat faries scattered
little bloody notebooks and pens.
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Mexican air conditioner shrill
blasting my ears
affecting my mind with this sight.
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shrivelled red balloon in a tree
near this horrible mess of wounded kids.
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-Will Dockery (Summer 1996)
A troublesome piece of poetry, I'll grant you.
🙂