Re: I Met A Girl / Will Dockery

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Date : 06. Feb 2025, 20:43:50
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HarryLime wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
Faraway Star wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
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I Met A Girl
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I met a girl
she came from California.
It was in a dream
we knew each other instantly.
She was a little freckled girl
from out of
my high school past.
>
And she looked up at me
and talked real spacey.
I've forgotten her name
though she told it to me twice.
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We talked
a really detached situation.
She said years ago
I was so shy
she thought I was gay.
At this point I kissed her
and put my finger to her hole.
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And she looked up at me
and talked real spacey.
I have forgotten her name
though she told it to me twice.
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I don't know why it was
that I would think of her.
I made a couple of puns
about her name that made me blush.
But her softness in tone
made me feel all right.
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All I want to do
is get in contact.
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-Will Dockery / May 8 1982
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The official version of this poem.
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Yes, that matters.
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Only second read of this today, it captures that touch of Bukowski.
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Your poem is still extremely misogynistic, demeaning and degrading to
women,
A lying misrepresentation that has been shown wrong many times.

I don't think so at all, as I've pointed out earlier, the poem is in the
Erotic poetry genre, and the characters are influenced by Beatnik and
1980s new wave and punk rock zeitgeist of those eras.
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The poetry is a snapshot from 1982, very different times which you
apparently missed, Pendragon.
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Admittedly, I've never groped a young woman 2 minutes after meeting her.
Once again, that's not in the poem, Pendragon.
Not at all, it's a very accurate depiction of a rock and roll romance
circa early 1980s
As I said, I know because I was there, I lived and dreamed it.
Glad to clear up your confusion and set the record straight again.

Date Sujet#  Auteur
4 Feb 25 * Re: I Met A Girl / Will Dockery28W.Dockery
4 Feb 25 `* Re: I Met A Girl / Will Dockery27HarryLime
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6 Feb 25  i`* Re: I Met A Girl / Will Dockery12HarryLime
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19 Feb 25  i`* Re: I Met A Girl / Will Dockery5HarryLime
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