Re: When The Mill Shut Down / Will Dockery

Will Dockery wrote:

George J. Dance wrote:

Will-D...@none.i2p wrote:

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The other thing we could do with "Mill" is print it on its own

page, centered both horizontally and vertically so that it's surrounded
by white space - and, possibly, using a larger font size for it. Again,
this is just an option for your consideration.

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That was unclear. I didn't mean center-justifying the lines; I

think that left-justification looks better here. I meant moving the
whole block to the right so there's a roughly equal block of white space
on both sides (and the same both above and below).

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To repeat, it's an important poem in the book, so I think it

needs consideration.

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Yes, that sounds good, George.

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Thanks for the confirmation; it shall be done. BTW, please look at

the idea of switching lines 5 and 6, and give me a thumbs-up or -down.

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For the reasons mentioned, at this time I feel the lines should stay

the same.

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OK.

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In the time before publication, I will continue to think on it... it
isn't set in stone yet.

True. Up to the point we make the pdf, there's still a chance to edit.
Even afterward, we can make changes, though that involves making a new
pdf - but we'll have to do that eventually anyway, when you get an LOC
#.

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I suppose the time is near that we finalize the edit for the Kindle
ebook edition.