Re: "I Met A Girl" / Will Dockery

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De : will.dockery (at) *nospam* gmail.com (W.Dockery)
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Date : 25. Feb 2025, 01:36:30
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On Mon, 24 Feb 2025 23:52:48 +0000, HarryLime wrote:

On Mon, 24 Feb 2025 21:31:27 +0000, W.Dockery wrote:
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(Moved from another thread discussion with Harry Lime for context):
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I Met A Girl
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I met a girl
she came from California.
It was in a dream
we knew each other instantly.
She was a little freckled girl
from out of
my high school past.
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And she looked up at me
and talked real spacey.
I've forgotten her name
though she told it to me twice.
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We talked
a really detached situation.
She said years ago
I was so shy
she thought I was gay.
At this point I kissed her
and put my finger to her hole.
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And she looked up at me
and talked real spacey.
I have forgotten her name
though she told it to me twice.
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I don't know why it was
that I would think of her.
I made a couple of puns
about her name that made me blush.
But her softness in tone
made me feel all right.
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All I want to do
is get in contact.
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-Will Dockery / May 8 1982
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On Mon, 24 Feb 2025 20:41:00 +0000, HarryLime wrote:
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On Mon, 24 Feb 2025 20:19:16 +0000, W.Dockery wrote:
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On Mon, 24 Feb 2025 19:26:07 +0000, HarryLime wrote:
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On Mon, 24 Feb 2025 19:01:58 +0000, W.Dockery wrote:
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On Mon, 24 Feb 2025 18:57:47 +0000, HarryLime wrote:
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On Mon, 24 Feb 2025 18:52:31 +0000, W.Dockery wrote:
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On Mon, 24 Feb 2025 17:37:05 +0000, HarryLime wrote:
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On Mon, 24 Feb 2025 16:56:07 +0000, Will Dockery wrote:
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On Mon, 24 Feb 2025 14:18:07 +0000, HarryLime wrote:
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Will Dockery wrote:
On Wed, 19 Feb 2025 12:19:20 +0000, NancyGene wrote:
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"Copy MID" worked fine for us.  The reason it didn't work for Will
Dockery and George Dance is that they are computer (and in other ways)
illiterate.
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I've been using computers since the 1980s and have been on Usenet (via
mostly Google Groups) since 1998.
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I am on a mobile gizmo now so that might have given me some problems
getting that function to work.
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With 45 years of computer experience,
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How long have you been using computers, Nancy Gene?
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It seems anyone who has been alive for the past 45 years should have had
computer experience.
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Post-editing someone xxxxxxxxxx xxxxx xxxxx
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I'll remember that the next time you post edit me, Pendragon.
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I've no need to post-edit you
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You post edited my poem recently.
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Karma Bombs???
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That "re-edit" was from 10 years ago -- and it was a parody.
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No, in talking about your post-edit of "I Met A Girl."
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That's different scenario.  I paraphrased
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You post-edited it, whether you admit it or not.
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And so it goes.
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I did not change your poem *without acknowledging the change,* then go
on to critique it based on the altered version.
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Yes, you did.
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I've moved this post over to the poem in question, so we, and the
audience, can look at the archived evidence.
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I told you to post a link to the thread HERE.
I'll do that when time permits.

Date Sujet#  Auteur
24 Feb 25 * Re: "I Met A Girl" / Will Dockery6W.Dockery
25 Feb 25 `* Re: "I Met A Girl" / Will Dockery5HarryLime
25 Feb 25  +* Re: "I Met A Girl" / Will Dockery3W.Dockery
25 Feb 25  i`* Re: "I Met A Girl" / Will Dockery2HarryLime
25 Feb 25  i `- Re: "I Met A Girl" / Will Dockery1W.Dockery
25 Feb 25  `- Re: "I Met A Girl" / Will Dockery1W.Dockery

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