Sujet : Re: I Met A Girl / Will Dockery
De : will.dockery (at) *nospam* gmail.com (W.Dockery)
Groupes : alt.arts.poetry.comments rec.arts.poemsDate : 27. Feb 2025, 19:43:48
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General-Zod wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
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I Met A Girl
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I met a girl
she came from California.
It was in a dream
we knew each other instantly.
She was a little freckled girl
from out of
my high school past.
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And she looked up at me
and talked real spacey.
I've forgotten her name
though she told it to me twice.
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We talked
a really detached situation.
She said years ago
I was so shy
she thought I was gay.
At this point I kissed her
and put my finger to her hole.
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And she looked up at me
and talked real spacey.
I have forgotten her name
though she told it to me twice.
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I don't know why it was
that I would think of her.
I made a couple of puns
about her name that made me blush.
But her softness in tone
made me feel all right.
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All I want to do
is get in contact.
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-Will Dockery / May 8 1982
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The official version of this poem.
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Yes, that matters.
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On y second read of this today, it captures that touch of Bukowski but
is fully a Doc story... superb...
Definitely a Buk influence here.
https://youtu.be/yDbpbalkjT8?si=3k2OhEriMjlx74zJ😏