Re: Silk Diamond / Zod

On Wed, 19 Feb 2025 19:06:32 +0000, W.Dockery wrote:

On Wed, 19 Feb 2025 17:10:18 +0000, Will Dockery wrote:

General-Zod wrote:

Will Dockery wrote:
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George J. Dance wrote:

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Today's poem on Penny's Poetry Blog:
Silk Diamond, by George Sulzbach

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Silk diamond
September golden bullet
The leather horse
Rider
With bad news.
[...]

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https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2021/09/silk-diamond-george-sulzbach.html

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Since Zod is clearly the topic of the day, perhaps this is a good time
to post a retrospective of the best of his poetry and art.

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Here's an excellent selection from George Dance from the poetry of
General Zod.

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Again... I THX...

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Good afternoon, Zod, again, one of your best.

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I'll tell Zod y'all miss him, and that he should hurry back.
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I wrote a "critique" of this poem back when I blogged it, and after
rereading it tonight I decided to post it in the comments, as a way into
the poem for new readers. My experiment wasn't completely successful; I
had to post one paragraph at a time, and some are indented while others
are not, so it's rather ragged. But at least it appears in order, and
having it there in a more permanent location, where it can be read, adds
value to the page IMO.