Re: Coil / Will Dockery

On Wed, 5 Mar 2025 19:04:07 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:

Will Dockery wrote:

On Sun, 2 Mar 2025 20:44:04 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:

Ironywaves wrote:

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Coil
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This coil of pain
memory burns
with flashing image
and haunting misses.
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Distinct dream vision
mixed up with consciousness
train seems right on top of me
conductor has an agenda.
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Only the gods see beyond this veil
I've seen those eyes
red blazing shaking.
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No time to think,
no desire to.
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There seems to be a wide awake
slow ride
consciousness carries
stretches through these years
these days... this minute.
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As if the night could purify
rather than corrupt
my reptilian hands
my repetition in signs.
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-Will Dockery  (2003)

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Here is a Will Dockery gem
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Thanks again, Mummy Chunk.

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This is a response to the post seen at:
http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=657979739#657979739
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Wow, this thread is really breaking up at Nova BBS:

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https://www.novabbs.com/arts/article-flat.php?id=258797&group=alt.arts.poetry.comments#258797

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Thanks again to Retro Guy at Nova BBS and MT at JLA Forums for getting
this thread back on track.

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Did they fix something?  What happened?

The broken thread is coming back together now, as seen on Nova BBS:
https://www.novabbs.com/arts/article-flat.php?id=259013&group=alt.arts.poetry.comments#259013
This is in response to Post #17.
😏