Re: Coil / Will Dockery

MummyChunk wrote:
 

W.Dockery wrote:
On Mon, 17 Mar 2025 21:46:02 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:
 

Miguel Sucio wrote:
MummyChunk wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
 Coil
 This coil of pain
memory burns
with flashing image
and haunting misses.
 Distinct dream vision
mixed up with consciousness
train seems right on top of me
conductor has an agenda.
 Only the gods see beyond this veil
I saw those eyes
red blazing and shaking.
 No time to think,
no desire to.
 There seems to be a wide awake
slow ride
conciousness carries
stretches through these years
these days... this minute.
 As if the night could purify
rather than corrupt
my reptilian hands
my repetition is signs.
 -Will Dockery  (2003)
   Here is a Will Dockery gem
  What makes it a gem?  Please elaborate in detail so you don't look like
a slurper such as Zod, Jordy, etc
 I just enjoyed reading it!
 

  Good morning again MC, glad you liked it.
 😏
 

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   Good afternoon to you too.