Sujet : Re: I said "-hi-"! (have a nice day, dammit.)
De : will.dockery (at) *nospam* gmail.com (W.Dockery)
Groupes : rec.arts.poemsDate : 29. Mar 2025, 23:17:15
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On Mon, 24 Feb 2025 5:20:17 +0000, cheesetray wrote:
Hieronymous707 wrote:
I was just going over some things that I've said.
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Some letters I'd written formed words in my head
that somehow just didn't make all that much sense,
perused, subsequently, in my new present tense.
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Their reading thus caused me to ask myself why.
Then, in looking for answers, to look to the sky,
the planets, the stars, and the expanse of it all.
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When I looked back, I found myself, small.
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So small in fact that I could stand on a word;
a sound I found pleasing. Perhaps you have heard
of the word, or the sound resounding in my head. Why,
it's the word you heard in your head when I said "-hi-".
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Consider word rhythms, and what they can do
in terms simply written, and rhymed just for you.
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Consider rhymes written, with words in betweening.
Consider the import, as if this had meaning.
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Then, as you consider these things in your head,
perhaps you'll take one more thing yet to be said
into consideration as our course has been set;
a plan has been hatched, and a wager is bet.
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Invest yourself now, and the attention you pay,
to laughter hereafter. Then, have a nice day!
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-hi-
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he's too good for us
The one and only J Corey Connor.
😏
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