Re: A Convolution in Her / Will Dockery

Will Dockery wrote:
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"Bill Evans"  wrote in message

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"Will Dockery" <will_dockery@outlook.com> posted the final

version of "The Ride (Combat Zone).

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Will, I'm not sufficiently educated or experienced in giving
a useful critique of this poem; I'll bet Mike would do a
good job of that.

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But it would help me if you could explain a couple of
things.  Asking them will make me look like a silly fool,
but I'm down with that.

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I look at "Rastas" and think, huh?  Does this refer to
Rastafarians, those mild-mannered pot-smoking laid-back
folks from Jamaica?  Can that be right?  What am I missing?

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And what is meant by "black" in "black pigs of poetry"?

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I wonder whatever happened to Bill Evans?

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I dunno