Re: Coil. by Will Dockery

Will-Dockery wrote:

MummyChunk wrote:

Will-Dockery wrote:

MummyChunk wrote:
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W.Dockery wrote:
On Mon, 17 Mar 2025 21:46:02 +0000, MummyChunk wrote:
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Miguel Sucio wrote:
MummyChunk wrote:
Will Dockery wrote:
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Coil
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This coil of pain
memory burns
with flashing image
and haunting misses.
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Distinct dream vision
mixed up with consciousness
train seems right on top of me
conductor has an agenda.
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Only the Gods see beyond this veil
I saw those eyes
red blazing and shaking.
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No time to think,
no desire to.
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There seems to be a wide awake
slow ride
conciousness carries
stretches through these years
these days... this minute.
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As if the night could purify
rather than corrupt
my reptilian hands
my repetition is signs.
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-Will Dockery  (2003)
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Here is a Will Dockery gem
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What makes it a gem?  Please elaborate in detail so you don't look like
a slurper such as Zod, Jordy, etc
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I just enjoyed reading it!
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Good morning again MC, glad you liked it.
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😏
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Good afternoon to you too.

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Hello again.

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Hi there 🥂

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Good afternoon, MC

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Howdy 🤠
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Ll
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