Re: Apple Montage / Will Dockery

Will Dockery wrote:

HarryLime wrote:

Will Dockery wrote:

>

Apple Montage
>
Sneaking around
with Cousin Jenny,
smoking menthol
beyond the sheds.
>
Late summer vacation 1973
in the backwoods of Tennessee.
>
To the right
behind the barn
were apple trees.
>
There were several
of those trees
and other trees
behind them
beyond a field
and behind them, other trees.
>
Later, I stood near
as a crowd
watched Pops and my Uncle
cooking apple butter;
stirring the brown gunk,
boiling in a huge black kettle.
>
I saw my father
secretly pass
a wine bottle
to my Uncle Clarence.
>
I went from
breathing cold mist
out back behind the barn,
to breathing
the hot misty steam.
>
The air smelled of apple fumes
and strong booze.
>
-Will Dockery
>
-------------
Read original thread at:
http://alt.arts.poetry.comments.narkive.com/cEgduQLs/apple-montage-will-dockery-ping-george
>
Apple Montage
>
Sneaking around
with Cousin Jenny,
smoking menthol
beyond the sheds.
>
Late summer vacation 1973
in the backwoods of Tennessee.
>
To the right
behind the barn
were apple trees.
>
There were several
of those trees
and other trees
behind them
beyond a field
and behind them, other trees.
>
Later, I stood near
as a crowd
watched Pops and my Uncle
cooking apple butter;
stirring the brown gunk,
boiling in a huge black kettle.
>
I saw my father
secretly pass
a wine bottle
to my Uncle Clarence.
>
I went from
breathing cold mist
out back behind the barn,
to breathing
the hot misty steam.
>
The air smelled of apple fumes
and strong booze.
>
-Will Dockery
>
----------
Read original thread at:
http://alt.arts.poetry.comments.narkive.com/cEgduQLs/apple-montage-will-dockery-ping-george
>
posted his poem in a new thread
>
After correcting the malicious vandalism of my poem, yes, I stared a new
thread today.
>
HTH and HAND

>

What a Donkey.

>

Says the little green monkey, Harry Lime.

>
Bet your booger was a brighter green than me!