Re: Grey Dawn in the Deep South / Will Dockery (reboot thread)

Will Dockery wrote:

General-Zod wrote:

Will Dockery wrote:

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Grey Dawn In the Deep South
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In the grey dawn
when the heavy valley air takes the city
in foggy arms.
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Almost chilly streets
that will lose this soon
in the sunshine noon
and afternoon hot as blazes.
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In the grey dawn
when the frogs croak
and two cats watch for birds.
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Rumbling sound
of the car next door
across the bushes that keep us apart.
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In the grey dawn
I hear a distant train
that comes closer to my street
on a crawl from Macon.
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Whistle whining
from a long way from here.
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A Monday that will soon
burn with daylight
heat and brightness so intense
it seems loud and pounding.
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-Will Dockery (7-19-21)
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From the Shadowville Mythos poetry blog:
https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2021/07/grey-dawn-in-deep-south.html
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Outstanding favor
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Thanks again for the nod, Zod.
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gray in the Deep South.

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That's the point of the poem, yes

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This is a response to the post seen at the vandalized original thread by
the same name.

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