Re: The Rivers of London Series

On 22/08/2024 16:07, Bobbie Sellers wrote:

On 8/20/24 21:44, Robert Carnegie wrote:

This is reading ahead quite a lot.  Remember
Lesley May.  And Simone Fitzwilliam actually does.

      Since I do not have these books at hand I quote
no names.

What I mean is that you're mentioning later
story events, that could be called "spoilers"
which distract a reader where themes are
developed.
I have to re-read the first book myself -
which has some unpleasant violent scenes -
but as far as I remember in the first two,
Peter has romantic and erotic feelings
towards Lesley May, but she does not
express feelings for him at that time.
Peter tells us later that Lesley claimed to
observe that Peter's romantic relationships
with other women do not last longer than
three months, that he always loses interest.
This doesn't account for him growing up as
the series runs.