Sujet : Re: New filk
De : garym (at) *nospam* mcgath.com (Gary McGath)
Groupes : rec.music.filkDate : 19. Jan 2025, 03:10:39
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On 1/18/25 5:52 PM, Arthur T. wrote:
If there's anyone left here, I'd like suggestions for a title.
Similarly, even I have problems keeping scansion on the third line of
the chorus, so let me know how it works for you.
ttto: Chim Chim Cheree by Richard M. Sherman and Robert B. Sherman
Wake nor asleep, but seems that you're somewhere between
You find you're aware of things half-way unseen
While in this state you can't decide if they are real
And you can't tell whether you feel what you feel
So what does it hide; what does it reveal?
The scansion on the chorus seems fine to me. The words are a little tricky to sing, but a moderately good singer should be able to handle them with some practice, perhaps slowing the tempo down a hair from the original song.
-- Gary McGath http://www.mcgath.com
Re: New filk